The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map above depicts the layout of Stokeford village in 1930 and 2010. It appears that there is a significant change over these years and the population has increased. Stoke
village
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Village
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is situated next to the East side of the Stoke
river
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River
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. One of the major changes in that area was in 2010, both the farm areas in the Southwest and Northeast and the small shop were converted into roads and residential areas; The village had new roads branches out from the main streets on the Northeastern, Northwestern, and below post office (
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one have a square like streets) had series of houses attach along. The primary school had two more buildings added. What was once the garden area was demolished and built as a retirement home. The only place
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remain
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unchanged was the post office that was standing next to the shops,
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which are
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are
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now situated
besides
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rows of
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instead
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • village
  • maps
  • Stokeford
  • 1930
  • 2010
  • main features
  • overview
  • changes
  • similarities
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