The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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prices

change

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monthly in three different types of metals

copper

,

nickel

and

zinc

in 2014.

Overall

, the

change

in

prices

of three metals

experenced

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experienced

fluctuation in 2014 except for the figure for

copper

which

remain

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steadily

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compared with each

month

. It is noticeable that the proportion of

prices

in three metals

were

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all increase compared

for

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the

prices

in 2013 December,

nickel

at 6%,

copper

at 2% and

zinc

at 1%. Between the

month

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months

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from

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January to June, the percentage

change

in

nickel

price dropped significantly by 9% in June compared with January, and the

prices

of

copper

and

zinc

also

were

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a slight decrease compared with January by 2% and 2.5% respectively. Over the following six

month

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, the average monthly

change

of

nickel

also

prsented

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presented

the

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trend of negativity until the

prices

rose by 1% in November and December compared with

previous

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the previous

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month

.

While

the trend of

zinc

same as

nickel

, the figures for

zinc

were slightly higher than

nickel

both

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in the

last

two months.

By contrast

, the percentage of

copper

in average price still remained

positively

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in the next half of

year

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the year

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,

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and reached a plateau at 1% from July to September.