The line graph below shows the number of cell phone subscribers in a particular city, by gender
The line chart illustrates the number of phone joiners in a specific city by men and
women
residents in Marycille City from 1995 to 2015.
Overall
, both male and female followers witnessed a dramatic increase between 1995 and 2005. Additionally
, it is clear that
women
primarily subscribe in the first ten years. However
, they are surpassed by men in the second half of the period.
To begin
with, women
's phone subscribers started the period at roughly 600 in 1995 and jumped to 2500 in 2005, however
, the total slightly dropped to approximately 2300 in 2010, in addition
, female participants hovered at the same statistic until the end of the period.
on the other hand
, male joiners began with 500 in the same year that women
did (1995) and witnessed a dramatic increase up to 2500 in 2005 and stayed the same up to 2010. Afterward
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Afterwards
leveled
off at Change the spelling
levelled
this
number until in 2030, it gradually shot up to the highest point at 2700.Submitted by amotoh10 on
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