The graph below shows trends in the USA meat and poultry consumption

The graph below shows trends in the USA meat and poultry consumption
The chart compares
price
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the price
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of US meat and poultry consumption between 1955 and 2012
Overall
, the four types of meat experienced different trends in the time period.
While
the
price
of pork and turkey
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apply
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stayed stable, the
cost
of beef and broiler changed with some fluctuations. In 1955 the
price
of beef was around 60
pounds
and
this
cost
increased sharply to 90 in 1976. In
this
year the barter of pork dropped to 40. The appraisal of broiler was 15
pounds
in 1961 and
this
price
rose significantly till 2009. Pork and turkey’s
cost
was changed slowly from 1961 to 2012. Between 1955
to
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and
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2012 park’s
price
converted from 50
pounds
to 40.
Turkey
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cost
transformed from 5
pounds
to 10 between 1961 and 2012.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words price, cost, pounds with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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