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The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The given line graph compares how many
people
 live in
cities
 of four nations,
Philippines
, Malaysia,
Tailand
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Thailand
 and Indonesia over the 50-year period, with
prediction
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predictions
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 for 2030 and 2040.
Overall
, It is noticeable that the percentage of
people
 living in
cities
 experienced a trend of increase in four countries. the number of
people
 living in Malaysia and Indonesia
cities
were
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increased
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a
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apply
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significant
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significantly
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 rise,
while
 the
figure
 for
Philippines
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the Philippines
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was
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fluctuation. Around 30% of
total
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the total
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 population lived in
Malasia
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Malaysia
city
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City
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 in 1970, which was slightly lower than those who lived in
Philippines
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the Philippines
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.
Afte
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then
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that
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, the percentage of
people
 living in
Malasia
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Malaysia
city
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City
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 have experienced a significant increase since 1976, reaching above 70% in 2020.
By contrast
,
people
 living in
Philippines
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the Philippines
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 fluctuated from 31% in 1970 to 43% in 2010. The
figure
 for
people
 who lived in Indonesia city was by far the lowest point at approximately 13%, but it rose sharply following the 50-year
peroid
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period
 to 50%, overtaking the
figure
 for Thailand in 2000 and
Philippines
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the Philippines
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 in 2010, reaching 50% in 2020.
Moreover
, the proportion of
total
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the total
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 population living in
Tailand
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Thailand
 just increased gradually from almost 20% in 1970 to 30% in 2020.
It is clear that
 the
figure
 of population in four
cities
 will be expected to increase in 2030 and 2040.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, cities, philippines, figure with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • percentage
  • population
  • cities
  • Asian countries
  • 1970
  • 2020
  • predictions
  • 2030
  • 2040
  • estimations
  • urban
  • increasing
  • steadily
  • Japan
  • China
  • rise
  • urbanization
  • South Korea
  • India
  • upward trend
  • slow pace
  • surpass
  • resided
  • projected
  • moderate increase
  • significant surge
  • exceed
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