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The line graph shows the number of players in four different sports in a particular European country between 1985 and 2005.

The line graph shows the number of players in four different sports in a particular European country between 1985 and 2005.
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The graph gives data on how many
players
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 played badminton, tennis, basketball and rugby in one country in Europe over the 20-year period.
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, the number of
players
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 in basketball and badminton levelled off,
while
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 the figures for rugby and tennis experienced some fluctuations. The number of
players
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 of basketball was about 80 in 1985, which remained stable until 2005. Meanwhile, in 1985 only 50
players
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 played badminton, which
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 levelled off at 50 in 2005 , In terms of rugby, the number of
players
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 was approximately 250 in 1985, and
then
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 it was followed by a dramatic decrease to 50
players
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 in 2005. Regarding tennis
players
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, in 1985 the trend stood at 150. After that, it saw an upward trend to 200
players
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 in 1385 before witnessing a slow increase to 210 and 220 in 2000 and 2005, respectively.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words players with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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