The pie chart below illustrates number of journal articles read per week by all students, PhD students and junior lecturers at an Australian University

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student population read 1-7 papers per

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the same amount of papers at that time.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

149 words

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The pie chart below illustrates number of journal articles read per week by all students, PhD students and junior lecturers at an Australian University

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