The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030.
The given chart compares how many average UK commuters per day travelling by three types of
transports
from 1970 to 2030.
Fix the agreement mistake
transport
Overall
, it is clear that
the number of UK people
traveling
by car and Change the spelling
travelling
train
both increase
over Wrong verb form
increased
60-year
period, Add an article
a 60-year
while
people
taking train
to travel saw a slight decrease.
It is noticeable that Add an article
the train
a train
car
Correct article usage
the car
is by
the most popular transport in 1970, Verb problem
was
stood
at approximately 5 Wrong verb form
standing
million
people
and people
driving the
car in Correct article usage
a
UK
experienced a significant rise, about 7 Correct article usage
the UK
million
people
in 2000, and then
it is expected to reach 9 million
people
in 2030.
The figure for people
who taking
Wrong verb form
take
bus
gradually Correct article usage
the bus
decrease
from 4 Correct subject-verb agreement
decreases
million
in 1970 to just above 3 million
in 2020, and the prediction of it will continue
decrease in 2030. Add the particle
continue to
By contrast
, the number of people
taking train
was by far the least popular transport in 1970, just under 3 Add an article
the train
a train
million
, and then
the users
of Correct quantifier usage
number of users
train
were a slight rise to 3 Add an article
the train
million
in 2000, surpassing the bus
users after 2010.Correct quantifier usage
number of bus
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, train, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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