The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
The line graph gives information about the proportion of the
population
in four Use synonyms
countries
(Use synonyms
Philippines
, Use synonyms
Malaysia
, Thailand and Indonesia) dwelling in Use synonyms
cities
between 1970 and 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
Use synonyms
Overall
, including entire Linking Words
countries
, the proportion of Use synonyms
the
individuals who resided in Correct article usage
apply
cities
continuously Use synonyms
increases
over the 7 decades. Wrong verb form
increased
In addition
, in 2040 Linking Words
Malaysia
will possess the highest number of citizens among the four Use synonyms
countries
. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, Linking Words
other
three Correct article usage
the other
countries
' Use synonyms
population
rates will Use synonyms
lower
than Add a missing verb
be lower
Use synonyms
Malaysia
in the same year.
Turning to the data in more detail, in 1970, Change noun form
Malaysia's
Malaysia
and Use synonyms
Use synonyms
Philippines
had almost Correct article usage
the Philippines
same
amount of Correct article usage
the same
population
approximately Use synonyms
at
30% and 31% respectively. Change preposition
apply
However
, after 7 decades, Linking Words
Malaysia
will have eight-tenth of Use synonyms
Use synonyms
population
in the Add an article
the population
cities
and both Use synonyms
countries
have a similar trend.
Looking at the details, in 1970, Indonesia had the lowest rate of Use synonyms
population
dwelling in Use synonyms
cities
around 13%, but overtook Thailand and Use synonyms
Use synonyms
Philippines
in 2000 and 2010 respectively. Correct article usage
the Philippines
Moreover
, Linking Words
Use synonyms
Philippines
changed Correct article usage
the Philippines
trend
twice between 1970 and 2040.Correct article usage
the trend
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