A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer.He/She has ask for your advice. write a letter to your friednd.in your letter explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you whould like to go camping with your friend this summer
Dear Nancy ,
I am glad to know that you have decided to go on a camping holiday
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year. You made the right decision in choosing Ngwe Saung Beach.
As for me , I frequently go there with my family because we love swimming in the ocean . During the Linking Words
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, you should be aware of things like car gas , food hygiene and some sea creatures. These will give you so much headache if you do not follow my instructions.
First of all , do not forget to fill the gas when you arrive in Pathein. You will not be able to find any gas shop between Pathein and Ngwe Saung Beach.
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, take some Bioflore and isotonic drinks with you . Sometimes too much seafood makes you have Linking Words
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thing is to apply suncream all the time and wear a swimming suit that covers your whole body to protect from some sea creatures.
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, these are the drawbacks and cautions you should know . I am sorry that I am unable to join you on Use synonyms
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. But I promise that I will join your team next year.
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Best regards,
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Task Response
For an even more effective letter, try to clearly indicate why you think your friend will enjoy the camping holiday in a more elaborated manner at the beginning.
Coherence & Cohesion
Consider adding more transitional phrases to enhance the flow of ideas between paragraphs for an even smoother reading experience.
Coherence & Cohesion
Use specific examples from your own camping experiences to provide more personalized advice and make your points more vivid.
Greeting and Closing
Your opening and closing are politely and effectively formulated, establishing a clear context for your letter.
Single Idea per Paragraph
You've structured your advice around practical tips, which is directly useful for your friend's first camping experience.
Writing Tone
The tone throughout the letter is suitably friendly and helpful, mirroring the advice-giving nature of the task well.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.