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The

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illustrated below depicts the divergence in temperature districts between tropical

mountains

and temperate ones. The data in

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is measured in both meters and feet. The

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clearly indicates that tropical

mountains

are much higher than temperate ones.

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it is seen that temperate

mountains

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more limits and do not have some of

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that tropical

mountains

have.

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they

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have some common things

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both massive

mountains

have permanent snow

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and Alpine meadows. The forest and Alpine

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zones are proportionally uplifted. As it

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earlier, Tropical

mountains

are higher than temperate

mountains

. The peak of tropical

mountains

is approximately 5000 meters which is 19000 feet,

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the highest point at temperate

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is about 3000 meters, in feet it is 11000. The

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illustrates that the snow line usually comes before

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snow zone.