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The diagram shows differences in temperature zones between tropical mountains and temperature mountains Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make compariso where relevant.

The diagram shows differences in temperature zones between tropical mountains and temperature mountains Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make compariso where relevant.
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The
diagram
 illustrated below depicts the divergence in temperature districts between tropical
mountains
 and temperate ones. The data in
diagram
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 is measured in both meters and feet. The
diagram
 clearly indicates that tropical
mountains
 are much higher than temperate ones.
Also
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 it is seen that temperate
mountains
posses
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possess
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 more limits and do not have some of
zones
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the zones
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 that tropical
mountains
 have.
However
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 they
also
 have some common things
for instance
the
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both massive
mountains
 have permanent snow
zone
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zones
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 and Alpine meadows. The forest and Alpine
meadows
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meadow
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 zones are proportionally uplifted. As it
was mentions
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 earlier, Tropical
mountains
 are higher than temperate
mountains
. The peak of tropical
mountains
 is approximately 5000 meters which is 19000 feet,
nonetheless
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nonetheless,
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 the highest point at temperate
mountains
 is about 3000 meters, in feet it is 11000. The
diagram
 illustrates that the snow line usually comes before
permanent
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the permanent
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 snow zone.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words diagram, mountains with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "illustrated" was used 2 times.
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