the charts below give information on the ages of the populations of yemen and italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. summarize the information and make comparison.
What has been depicted in the pie charts is
age
distribution in Correct article usage
the age
Yemen
and Italy in 2000, along with
future projections for 2050. Overall
, in 2000, the largest proportion of population
was allocated to the Add an article
the population
group
of people
aged 15 to 59, while
that of people
in this
group
is likely to decrease in Italy as time advanced.
In 2000, senior citizens made up more than 5 per cent of the
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apply
Yemen
's total population
, while
they constituted almost a quarter of the italian
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Italian
population
. Also
, although
14.3% of population
was allocated to the Add an article
the population
group
of people
aged 15 to 59, the figure for this
group
was about half. Whilethe
age of 15 to 59 accounted for 46.3 % Correct your spelling
While the
in
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of
Yemen
, while
this
group
represented below slightly half of Yemen
’s inhabitants.
In 2050, it is predicted that the percentage of population
aged below 14 will decrease to 37 % in Add an article
the population
Yemen
, compared to only three
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a three
percent
drop in Italian. Change the spelling
per cent
While
senior citizens are expected almost doubled
in Italy, they are likely to increase by a mere two Wrong verb form
double
percent
in Change the spelling
per cent
Yemen
. Moreover
, although
the group
of people
aged 15 to 59 is predicted to grow in Yemen
, it will decline by almost two- third
in Italy.Add a hyphen
two-third
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