The chart shows air pollution levels among four countries in 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows air pollution levels among four countries in 2012.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart shows information about the
pollution
levels in the
air
caused by
electricity
generation, transport, and industry in four countries, namely China, America, Japan, and
Australia
, in 2012.
Overall
,
industries
are the largest source of
pollution
. Meanwhile,
electricity
was the smallest, except in
Australia
. In China, the
air
pollution
caused by
industries
reached 80
ppm
, which is the highest level of
pollution
caused by
industries
in the period. Followed by transport and
electricity
, reaching 70
ppm
and around 60
ppm
, respectively. In America, the highest
pollution
source was transportation,
that
Correct pronoun usage
which
show examples
reached slightly under 60
ppm
, followed by
electricity
generation and industry around 30
ppm
. In Japan, the largest amount of
air
pollution
was caused by
industries
, same as in China, but at different levels (in Japan, slightly over 40
ppm
). Followed by transport (30
ppm
) and
electricity
(around 15
ppm
). Meanwhile, in
Australia
, the amount of
air
pollution
caused by industry,
electricity
, and transportation
were
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was
show examples
under 20
ppm
.
In addition
, in
Australia
, the
pollution
caused by
electricity
was the largest amount.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 86%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words pollution, air, electricity, australia, industries, ppm with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Pollutants
  • Industrialization
  • Regulations
  • Geographical factors
  • Emissions
  • Air quality
  • Carbon dioxide (CO2)
  • Particulate matter (PM)
  • Nitrogen oxides (NOx)
  • Fossil fuels
  • Renewable energy
  • Sustainable practices
  • Comparative analysis
  • Environmental impact
  • Public health
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