Most people pay taxes to contribute to the development of their country, however, some think they do not have to pay taxes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In the contemporary world, tax payers do not want to pay
plays
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play
an
crucial role in the advancement of the economy , but some individual believes in not Change the article
a
to pay
Change the verb form
paying
taxes
to the government.I partly agree with this
assertion and this
essay will acknowledge the validity of this
statement and elaborates on my reason .
On one hand , people pay different kinds of taxes
every day such
as ,
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apply
toll
, salary , goods and Fix the agreement mistake
tolls
service
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services
as well as
trade . All this
are
taken by the authorities and Correct subject-verb agreement
is
spend
on Wrong verb form
spent
develop
of infrastructure, welfare schemes, free education ,Replace the word
the development
Correct word choice
and pension
pension
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pensions
to
the old citizens . Change preposition
for
For example
, Sydney road transport charge
Correct subject-verb agreement
charges
fee
on car registration and road tax for using Correct article usage
a fee
motor ways
.All Correct your spelling
motorways
this
money will spent on laying new roads and widening existing one
.Correct pronoun usage
ones
In addition
to that, all this
helps to commute easily everyday
.
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every day
However
,on the other hand
,there are some peopleCorrect pronoun usage
who
taxes
because of their low standard of living specially
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especially
middle class
and Add a hyphen
middle-class
lower class
families. But many rich Add a hyphen
lower-class
prople
are not actually paying Correct your spelling
people
taxes
all over the world ,investing smarty in exemption business as well as
buying properties .For instance
,In India super rich people are buying land in rural area where government
want to develop the area Correct article usage
the government
as a result
they are getting exemption
.Add an article
an exemption
the exemption
This
facilities Change the determiner
These
are not choose
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are not choosing
are not chosen
buy
normal citizens Correct your spelling
by
due to
less purchasing power ended up paying huge duties .
In conclusion, government
should frame Add an article
the government
a
policies that Correct article usage
apply
benefits
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benefit
for
both salary earners Change preposition
apply
as well as
wealthy individuals. They should collect lesser taxes
from lower income groups and higher from the rich .This
will help them grow balanced,in
return it Correct word choice
and in
boost
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boosts
economy
.Add an article
the economy
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