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The graph below shows UK air pollutants, measured in million tonnes,

The graph below shows UK air pollutants, measured in million tonnes,
#uk #air #pollutants #million #tonnes
The chart above delineates the total amount of pollutants present in the
air
 in
UK
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the UK
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according to
 1900 to 2005 sensus.
Overall
, the graph illustrates a negative
trend
 throughout the mentioned years except for
Transport
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the Transport
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 sector. In the whole line chart, total
air
 pollutants
constitutes
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 the most contributing figure to
the
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apply
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air
 pollution.
Secondly
, it was
Industry
, but in the year 2002, both lines of
transport
 and
industry
 intersected and
industry
 showed a
decline
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declining
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trend
whereas
transport
 depicted a rise in
trend
. Household was the least contributing figure in the graph.
Initially
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Initially,
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 in the year 1900,
industry
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the industry
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 contributed around 6
million
tonnes
 of
air
 pollutants.
However
,
at the end
 of
2005
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2005,
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 it seemed to be the second
last
contributant
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contribution
 of about 2
million
tonnes
. On the
otherhand
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other hand
,
transport
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the transport
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 sector started from 1
million
tonnes
 in 1900 and ended up with a rise of 3
million
tonnes
. That was almost thrice of
air
pollutant
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pollutants
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 in 1900. Surprisingly, household
pollutnants
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pollutants
 followed a constant
trend
 from the year 1900 to 1999 and from there it started decreasing.
In
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At
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 the end of
2005
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2005,
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 it
had
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apply
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reached
to
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apply
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a count of zero.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words air, trend, transport, industry, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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