You live on the fourth floor of a five-storey building which is not equipped with an elevator (lift). Write a letter to your neighbors and in your letter • introduce yourself • say what the problem is • ask the neighbors to agree on the installation of an elevator.
Dear Abdullayev,
I am writing to you to consult with you about
equiping
a new elevator in our building Correct your spelling
equipping
that is
located in Kukdala city
.
My name is Turkmanova Shirin. I am your Capitalize word
City
neighbor
who Change the spelling
neighbour
live
on the Change the verb form
lives
fourh
floor. I moved to the city with my family 6 months ago. Correct your spelling
fourth
Therefore
, I do not know all of my neighbors
. I only know you because of your home near us.
To tell the truth, I have some Change the spelling
neighbours
problem
Fix the agreement mistake
problems
,
because there is no Remove the comma
apply
left
in our building. Correct pronoun usage
one left
Also
, I live with my old mother. My mother cannot walk very well. This
is the reason, she failed down from ladder. So, she suffer
to go down from stairs. I thinkChange the verb form
suffers
,
you have a little problem Remove the comma
apply
as
me because you reside on the fifth floor.
I want to apply for Bahodirov who is Change preposition
with
chairman
of Correct article usage
the chairman
this
building. If you consent to my offer, we will complain to the chairman about building a new elevator. I must tell this
information all
of us neighbors.
I hope you will reply to my letter as soon as possible.
Yours sincerely,
Turkmanova ShirinChange preposition
to all
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single idea per paragraph
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complete response
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greeting and closing
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complete response
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