the graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in foue Asian countries living in cities from1970-2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040

the graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in foue Asian countries living in cities from1970-2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040
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chart provided data on the percentage of residents who live in an urban city in
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, Malaysia, Thailand, and Indonesia over half a century and forecast twenty years from now. The data reveals a clear relationship between time and population. The percentage of citizens in Malaysia’s cities grew dramatically after they were first introduced in 1970, climbing to around two-thirds in just thirty years and to 80% by 2030. By the year 2040, a peak of over 80% was reached. The Philippines
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rose steadily from 30% in 1970 to around half in 1990.
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,
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figure slightly fell by 2010, only around 40
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.
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graph population of Thailand has maintained at around 25% until 2020 and it is going to climb to 40% in 2040. In Indonesia, the percentage of the total population will significantly rise by about 10%
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to 50% in 2040.
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