the graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in foue Asian countries living in cities from1970-2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040

the graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in foue Asian countries living in cities from1970-2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040
This
chart provided data on the percentage of residents who live in an urban city in
Philippines
Correct article usage
the Philippines
show examples
, Malaysia, Thailand, and Indonesia over half a century and forecast twenty years from now. The data reveals a clear relationship between time and population. The percentage of citizens in Malaysia’s cities grew dramatically after they were first introduced in 1970, climbing to around two-thirds in just thirty years and to 80% by 2030. By the year 2040, a peak of over 80% was reached. The Philippines
also
rose steadily from 30% in 1970 to around half in 1990.
However
,
this
figure slightly fell by 2010, only around 40
percent
Change the spelling
per cent
show examples
.
It is clear that
from
this
graph population of Thailand has maintained at around 25% until 2020 and it is going to climb to 40% in 2040. In Indonesia, the percentage of the total population will significantly rise by about 10%
1970
Change preposition
from 1970
show examples
to 50% in 2040.
Submitted by yusei.nakano on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
What to do next:
Look at other essays: