You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below show the percentage of Australian men in three age groups who were employed in 1984, 2001 and 2014.
This
chart illustrates the ratio of gentlemen working in 1984, 2001 and 2014 according to
age group.
Overall
, it is clearly apparent, that adult Pipil prefers to work more professionally and throughout the period young teens were discouraged from being workers besides
that elder people were opposed to them.
To begin
with, throughout the chart young adults (35 to 44) choose to work in an organisation with a proportion of around 91. Additionally
, the ratio of adult Pipil steadily increased through the period of time, in 1984, 2001 more or less than 40% in 2014 just over a half.
In addition
, young teens ( 15 to 19) avoiding to work in a job and because of that their portion was receding every year. In 1984,2001 just over half with part of around 60% and in 2014 the percentage declined to around 10% and stood at 50%.Submitted by tushalk329 on
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Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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