The bar chart below shows the percentages of children from four countries taking part in four kinds of activities in 2018. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the percentages of children from four countries taking part in four kinds of activities in 2018. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the proportion of kids from various nations participating in multiple activities like
,
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computer
games
, reading, board
games
and watching TV.
Overall
, It is clearly apparent, that
computer
games
have been given more priority than any other game.
Nigeria
accounts
more
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in
computer
games
and the least participation in reading competitions.
To begin
with,
Nigeria
have
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accounts in
computer
games
across the other three nations with a
ratio
of 60% and Malaysia, Sudan and China. Malaysia and Sudan have a similar
ratio
of 50% and China with 40%.
On the other hand
, all four countries have a similar
ratio
of watching TV with 30%.
In addition
, board
games
have almost above a quarter in every country apart from
Nigeria
with 20%,
While
reading
is least participated
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in every county Malaysia with 20% and China,
Nigeria
and Sudan have accounted for 15%, and both countries have a similar
ratio
of 10%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words computer, games, nigeria, ratio with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 4 times.
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