The bar chart below shows the percentages of children from four countries taking part in four kinds of activities in 2018. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the percentages of children from four countries taking part in four kinds of activities in 2018. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the proportion of kids from various nations participating in multiple activities like
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computer
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games
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, reading, board
games
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and watching TV.
Overall
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, It is clearly apparent, that
computer
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games
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have been given more priority than any other game.
Nigeria
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accounts
more
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in
computer
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games
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and the least participation in reading competitions.
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with,
Nigeria
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have
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accounts in
computer
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games
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across the other three nations with a
ratio
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of 60% and Malaysia, Sudan and China. Malaysia and Sudan have a similar
ratio
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of 50% and China with 40%.
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, all four countries have a similar
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of watching TV with 30%.
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, board
games
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have almost above a quarter in every country apart from
Nigeria
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with 20%,
While
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reading
is least participated
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least participates
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in every county Malaysia with 20% and China,
Nigeria
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and Sudan have accounted for 15%, and both countries have a similar
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of 10%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words computer, games, nigeria, ratio with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • participation rate
  • bar chart
  • percentage
  • activity
  • comparison
  • trends
  • cultural preferences
  • notable differences
  • popular
  • least popular
  • indoor activities
  • outdoor activities
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