You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below give information about world spending and population. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 word
The pie charts illustrate the
world
expenditure on various items as well as
the population
in some world
regions.
Overall
, Food and Transport represent the highest shares of spendings
, Fix the agreement mistake
spending
while
people spend the lowest amount of money on clothing. In addition
, Asia accounts for the largest percentage of the world
's population
.
In terms of the spendings
, Food makes up 24% of the total expenditures. Followed by Transport ( 18%). The figure for housing doubles that for clothing at 12% and 6%. And the remaining share( 40%) is contributed to other items.
Regarding Fix the agreement mistake
spending
Population
, above half of the people in the world
reside in Asia. America and Europe both rank second with 14% of the total population
. Africa closely follows by
4% less share than them. Change preposition
with
Other
5% live in Correct article usage
The other
the
other parts of the Correct article usage
apply
world
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words world, population with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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