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The chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000*20.., and future projections for 2025.

The chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000*20.., and future projections for 2025.
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The
bar
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chart
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 below displays data about Southland’s key
exports
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 in 2000, and 2024, and future new project work for 2025.
Overall
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,
this
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bar
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chart
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 shows Southland’s main
exports
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 in 2000 and 2024 and the future projections for 2025. X represents sections
such
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 as International tourism, Daily
products
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,
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Meat
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and Meat
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products
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. Meanwhile, Y represents £ in billion. 2000, 2024, and 2025 are represented by little diagonal lines, average diagonal lines and total black in the
bar
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chart
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. It is clear, that the
bar
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chart
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 represents 3 sections International tourism, Daily
products
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,
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Meat
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and Meat
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products
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. In each section, there is the index of main
exports
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 in billion £ in specific years: 2000, 2024, and 2025. There were 8, almost 9, and almost 10 in 2000, 2024, and 2025 in one of the
exports
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 of Southland as worldwide tourism. There were almost 7 in
Daily
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the Daily
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products
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 part and exactly 6 in the
Meat
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products
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 part in 2000. There are 10 in
Daily
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the Daily
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products
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 part, 5.5 in
Meat
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products
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 in
current
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the current
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 year:2024. What about future productions, there will be 9.9 in one of main
exports
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: Dairy product.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words bar, chart, exports, products, meat with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "represents" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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