A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has ask for your advice. write a letter to your friednd.in your letter explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer
Dear Maria,
hope you are fine,
I know that you have decided to join the camping group to spend your summer vacation and you asked my opinion about that. You know that I went camping a couple of times and, to be honest, I should say that it was really enjoyable. But don’t forget to consider some points
while
choosing the group that you are going with. The one that I joined, had a really supportive leader and she was constantly checking everything from the status of our accommodation to the places that we wanted to go to. Also
, she was really sensitive about choosing the people who were joining the team as she believed that good accompanies can make a camping memory memorable or horrible, and I should say that I totally agree with her. Everything was absolutely nice except not having a toilet which was kind of torturing for me as well as
sleeping outside that I couldn’t feel safe with. Considering all these points, I still tend to attend another camping as the negative points could not stop me from enjoying the moments I had there. So, if you want me to join you at this
event, let me know the exact time as I need to ask for off in my job.
Take care,
MojganSubmitted by mojgan.sobhani on
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task response
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tone
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structure
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Structure your letter
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- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.