Some individuals
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higher priorities should
more on cutting environmental pollution and
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issues to avoid illness and outbreak diseases.
This
writer totally agrees with
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and will lay out the reasons below.
First things
first,
some environmental
problems
are always related to
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, especially pollution. Nowadays, humans are more independent with their own inventions and
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breakthroughs
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made them become advanced.
However
, people are taking more
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of
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forgetCorrect word choice
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to handle
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, and it leads to some consequences that
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hard to deal
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the long run.
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will
also
cause a lot of repercussions to themselves.
Therefore
, governments should not turn a blind eye
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thisCorrect determiner usage
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problems
and point out some temporary and long-term methods.
For instance
, they can organise a campaign or crusade to
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in order to protect their life
environment
by
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more trees,
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floating garbage
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tackleWrong verb form
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housing
problems
such
as hygiene in each
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and
helpWrong verb form
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each
othersChange to a singular noun
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to protect
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environment
.
On the other hand
,
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should invest in modern technology to help them work out some backlog
problems
that they should tackle
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. Using technology
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should
also
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because it has a lot of benefits.
Moreover
, higher priorities should attract
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citizensChange noun form
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, as it could be one of the
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make
environment
become Verb problem
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worse. Nowadays, people are littering and factories are
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more contaminated fumes into
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, and it harms
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and people
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around there,
therefore
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should fine them to prevent
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that phenomenon
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and protect
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.
Therefore
,
while
addressing environmental and housing issues is crucial, a holistic strategy that encompasses various factors is essential for effective disease prevention.