The chart shows air pollution levels among four countries in 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart illustrates the levels of
air
pollutant
that happened in four nations Fix the agreement mistake
pollutants
among
2012. Change preposition
in
Air
pollution
level is devided
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divided
by
three reasons which are Change preposition
into
electricty
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electricity
geneation
, Correct your spelling
generation
transport
, and industry
. In general, it can clearly be seen that China became the country which had the highest air
pollution
rate
and
followed by America, and Correct word choice
apply
then
Japan and Australia.
In China, industry
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the industry
donated
the biggest Verb problem
contributed
pollution
of air
conditions with its rate
is 80 than transport
and electric generation
field
which became the second and third position, respectively. Meanwhile, the highest level for Fix the agreement mistake
fields
this
circumstance in America are
dominated by Change the verb form
is
transport
which had score
just below 60 Correct article usage
a score
of
Change preposition
in
air
pollution
level. The electric generation
had slightly
higher Add an article
a slightly
rate
than Correct article usage
the industry
industry
part which Correct article usage
the industry
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is
are
about 30 and the Correct subject-verb agreement
is
industry
score is under 30.
Same
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Similar
as
China, the most sum of Change preposition
to
air
pollution
levels in Japan caused
by Add a missing verb
are caused
industry
which had score
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a score
almost
60, Change preposition
of almost
then
transport
, and the last
is industry
. However
, the rate
of Japan is less than America. Australia turned as
the lowest country which had Change preposition
out as
air
pollution
scores merely under 20 for all categorise
. The Correct your spelling
categories
rate
for electricity generation
almost
20, but the Add a missing verb
is almost
rate
of transport
and industry
which had the same scores are just under Correct article usage
the electricty
electricty
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electricity
generation
's rate
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words air, pollution, transport, industry, rate, generation with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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