The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The following illustration shows the percentages of illiterate
people
people
according to
the regions that they live, and
their gender.
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in and
Overall
, we can observe the least number
of illiterate people
live in developed countries
and the highest number
of them live in South Asia. Also
, it is worth mentioning that the number
of illiterate females is higher than males in each mentioned region.
In developed countries
the percentage of illiterate males and females is less than 10%, unlike Add a comma
countries,
to
South Asia, Arab states, Change preposition
in
Sub-Saharan
Africa. In these Correct word choice
and Sub-Saharan
countries
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countries,
people
are way higher than 10 percent.
However
, in East Asian countries
and Oceania
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Oceania,
number
of illiterate men is quite low approximately 7%, although
the percentage of women makes
around 20%. The same trend has repeated with Latin American and Caribbean Verb problem
is
countries
, where the percentage of males makes up exactly 10% of the population and around 15% of females are illiterateSubmitted by intiqam.hasanov on
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