The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The line chart illustrates the percentage of residents who have habits of buying
coffee
or tea in five
cities
in Australia. A majority of people went to the café for
coffee
or tea in the
last
four weeks in all five
cities
except Adelaide. Less than half a percentage of residents bought fresh
coffee
within four weeks and accounted for the least portion. Those who bought
instant
coffee
in the
last
four weeks fluctuated throughout the
cities
, Hobart ranked the most, at approximately 54%. It is noteworthy that the preferences between going for a café and buying fresh or
instant
coffee
are similar throughout the
cities
,
however
, the people who live in Adelaide slightly prefer purchasing
instant
coffee
rather than fresh ones.
To sum up
, plenty of residents in Australia tend to love to go to a café for
coffee
or tea, rather than buying fresh
coffee
.
Instant
coffee
is likely to be consumed rather than fresh
coffee
.
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