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Introduction and clarity
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Paragraph structure
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Cohesion and Linking words
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Addressing the full prompt
Try to provide a balanced viewpoint by discussing alternatives to animal testing in addition to its merits and drawbacks, as the question prompts.
Use of examples
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Task engagement
You've taken a stance, as required by the prompt, which is good for engaging with the task.
Example usage
The use of examples, such as the reference to testing on mice for medical research, helps to support your main points.
Conclusion
Your conclusion sums up your viewpoint effectively, emphasizing the importance of regulation to mitigate the negative impacts on animals.
Your opinion
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