The table shows data about underground railway systems in siz major cities with data opened, kilometres of route and passenger numbers per year in millions.

The table shows data about underground railway systems in siz major cities with data opened, kilometres of route and passenger numbers per year in millions.
The tables give information on underground railways of distinct cities around the world based on the year opened,
route
distance
in kilometres
as well as
the number of travellers annually.
Overall
, cities with older railways
such
as London, Paris and Tokyo had a relatively higher number of passengers and the longest
route
distance
as compared to the newer rail systems which had a significantly lower number of people traversing through their
short
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distance
railways. In terms of rail transport that opened in the 1980s and early 90s, London which was opened in 1863 has the longest
route
of 394 kilometres. Tokyo
on the other hand
, was reported to have attracted the most rail users at 1927
million
each year which is more than double that of London. Looking specifically at the newer rails, Kyoto has the shortest travelling
distance
of just 11km and
consequently
, minimal passengers, 50
million
persons annually.
Likewise
, Los Angeles, only exceeded Kyoto by 5
million
travellers to attain a total of 50
million
yearly
although
it more than doubles Kyoto in terms of its
route
totalling 28km.
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