The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,, and make comparisons where relevent.
The chart illustrates the process of how
sugar
is made from sugar
cane. Overall
, it is obvious that there are totally 7 steps that can be categorized into 3 stages: material preparation, processing and drying.
First and formost
, Correct your spelling
foremost
sugar
canes are grown from 12 to 18 months before being harvested by farmers or harvesting machines. The sugar
canes are then
put into a crusher, where they will be crushed into juice for the next stage.
During the process stage, the juice undergoes 2 different steps. They are purified in a filter with limestone. The filter are
Change the verb form
is
then
employed to change the juice into a mixture. The mixture is subsequently
evaporated in a burning evaporator and become
syrup.
Once the processing stage is completed, Change the verb form
becomes
sugar
crystals from syrup
will be separated by a centrifuge machine. Correct article usage
the syrup
Finally
, the sugar
crystals are dryed
and cooked, marking the conclusion of the course.Correct your spelling
dried
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