The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourst facilities.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourst facilities.
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The maps illustrate some tourist equipment and places that have been built on an
island
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, it can be seen that the
island
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has grown dramatically over time and turned into a place where tourist can spend their leisure time. First of all, before constructing the resorting areas in the west and east of the
island
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for people who come from foreign countries, the
island
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was an empty land where it had only some palm trees in it but the accommodation places
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built with a round footpath around the palm trees in the west side of the
island
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as well as
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the reporting section in the west of trees which are located on the east side of the
island
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, people who spend their leisure time in cottages near to beach can use that place for swimming which was not possible in the past. Second of all, The
recritional
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recreational
places are located in the
center
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of the
island
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where the reception cottage is in the middle of the
island
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with a big restaurant on its own which is connected to each other by a road that lorries can move there easily.
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, in the past, there was not a pier in the south of the
island
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but today a pier was built in that area where boats can stay there and people can have fun on it.
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