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The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of kolkata.

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The graph illustrates the average figures for
temperatures
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 and precipitation over
calendar
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a calendar
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 year in Kolkata.
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, it is noticeable that monthly figures for
temperatures
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 in Kolkata remain relatively stable,
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 monthly figures for rain have considerable fluctuations.
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, the highest rainfall is recorded in July and August,
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temperatures
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 are the highest in April and May. In detail, as for precipitation, the amount of rainfall starts at about 30
mm
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 in Jan, and
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 it increases by 70
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 to 100
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 in May. The number of rainfall shows rapid growth of 150
mm
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 in Jun. As it reaches summer, the figure reaches a peak at 330
mm
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 in Jul and it stays at the plateau for 2 months. After that, there is a sharp drop of 310
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 in Dec.
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, as regards average
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, the temperature begins at 20
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 in Jan. It shows slight increases during the next 3 months and
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 reaches a high of 32
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 in May. After that, it reaches a plateau at around 32
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 until Jun. Since
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 it drops gradually to 28
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 from 30
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 for the next 4 months. It hits the bottom of 20
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 in Dec, meaning that it returns to its initial figure.
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