The diagram shows the design of a modern landﬁll for household waste.

#design #landﬁll #household #waste

A glance at the diagram provides a design of a modern landfill for household waste.

Overall

, there are four steps the first step and the second one

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are

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about the preparation of construction and ending with closure.

According to

the information shown in the diagram,

the first step is

to dig a man-made hold.

Secondly

, synthetic substances should be put in the hole including drainage pipes, a drainage tank and clay.

Thirdly

, household waste can be placed in the hole

while

waste-liquid

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waste liquid

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will be collected in the drainage tank. The final procedure is to cover the hole with clay and deliver gases by a pipe.

To sum up

it can be apparently seen that the procedure does not require a lot of equipment and can be done easily in households as it mostly uses the materials which can conveniently be obtained.

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The diagram shows the design of a modern landﬁll for household waste.

Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sprots to younger children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.

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