The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
The figure illustrates the
number
of people who have been living in
cities
in four different countries of Asia in a 70-year period, from 1970 to 2040.
Overall
, it can be seen
although
some countries have experienced dramatic
growth
in metropolitan residences, the
number
of individuals in these countries has been being increased respectively. First of all, in 1970 Indonesia had the lowest amount in
population
of
cities
with slightly more than one in ten.
However
,
this
amount surged sharply by 35% in the next 40 years and overcame Thailand and the Philippines, in 2000 and 2010 respectively.
Also
, it is predicted that Indonesia will experience a 15%
growth
by 2040. Second of all, Malaysia has seen a skyrocketing
growth
in its
cities
'
population
and by 2020
this
number
doubled, from 30% to 70%.
Furthermore
, Malaysian
cities
' residents will increase by more than one-tenth by 2040 and it will reach at peak.
However
, the Philippines in 1970 had the highest portion of
population
in its
cities
with more than one-third in total. After a fluctuating movement in the next 30 years, it saw a 10% increase
as well as
gradual
growth
by 2040 when the
population
will be halved.
Also
, Thailand after a 10% increase in the
number
of citizens from 1970 to 1990, had a plateau movement until 2020 and it is predicted that its
population
will reach 30% to 45% which is the lowest amount among all other nations in 2040.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • percentage
  • population
  • Asian countries
  • living in cities
  • 1970
  • 2020
  • predictions
  • 2030
  • 2040
  • introduction
  • overview
  • trend
  • body paragraph
  • compare
  • predicted percentages
  • summarize
  • closing statement
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