The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

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The figure illustrates the

number

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of people who have been living in

cities

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in four different countries of Asia in a 70-year period, from 1970 to 2040.

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, it can be seen

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some countries have experienced dramatic

growth

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in metropolitan residences, the

number

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of individuals in these countries has been being increased respectively. First of all, in 1970 Indonesia had the lowest amount in

population

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cities

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with slightly more than one in ten.

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amount surged sharply by 35% in the next 40 years and overcame Thailand and the Philippines, in 2000 and 2010 respectively.

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, it is predicted that Indonesia will experience a 15%

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by 2040. Second of all, Malaysia has seen a skyrocketing

growth

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in its

cities

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population

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and by 2020

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number

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doubled, from 30% to 70%.

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, Malaysian

cities

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' residents will increase by more than one-tenth by 2040 and it will reach at peak.

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, the Philippines in 1970 had the highest portion of

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in its

cities

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with more than one-third in total. After a fluctuating movement in the next 30 years, it saw a 10% increase

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gradual

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by 2040 when the

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will be halved.

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, Thailand after a 10% increase in the

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of citizens from 1970 to 1990, had a plateau movement until 2020 and it is predicted that its

population

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will reach 30% to 45% which is the lowest amount among all other nations in 2040.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, cities, growth, population with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

243 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

graph
percentage
population
Asian countries
living in cities
1970
2020
predictions
2030
2040
introduction
overview
trend
body paragraph
compare
predicted percentages
summarize
closing statement

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The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before.Some people say anageing population creates problemsfor governments.Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

In some countries, it can be difficult for people over the age of 50 to get good jobs, despite their experience. What do you think are the causes and effects of this problem?

People use the internet for medical advice and to do medical check ups rather than directly meeting with doctors in an office Why are they using the internet for this? Discuss you viewpoints on this.

Some parents encourage their children to be competitive, for example in sports and classes at school. Other parents think that encouraging competition can be harmful to their children.

Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?