The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
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The figure illustrates the
number
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of people who have been living in
cities
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in four different countries of Asia in a 70-year period, from 1970 to 2040.
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, it can be seen
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some countries have experienced dramatic
growth
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in metropolitan residences, the
number
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of individuals in these countries has been being increased respectively. First of all, in 1970 Indonesia had the lowest amount in
population
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of
cities
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with slightly more than one in ten.
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,
this
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amount surged sharply by 35% in the next 40 years and overcame Thailand and the Philippines, in 2000 and 2010 respectively.
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, it is predicted that Indonesia will experience a 15%
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by 2040. Second of all, Malaysia has seen a skyrocketing
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in its
cities
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'
population
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and by 2020
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number
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doubled, from 30% to 70%.
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, Malaysian
cities
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' residents will increase by more than one-tenth by 2040 and it will reach at peak.
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, the Philippines in 1970 had the highest portion of
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in its
cities
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with more than one-third in total. After a fluctuating movement in the next 30 years, it saw a 10% increase
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gradual
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by 2040 when the
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will be halved.
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, Thailand after a 10% increase in the
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of citizens from 1970 to 1990, had a plateau movement until 2020 and it is predicted that its
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will reach 30% to 45% which is the lowest amount among all other nations in 2040.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, cities, growth, population with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • percentage
  • population
  • Asian countries
  • living in cities
  • 1970
  • 2020
  • predictions
  • 2030
  • 2040
  • introduction
  • overview
  • trend
  • body paragraph
  • compare
  • predicted percentages
  • summarize
  • closing statement
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