The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012 You should write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012

You should write at least 150 words.
This
graph illustrates Australian
exports
, measured in percentages, to 4 different states in Asia from 1990 to 2012. In general, Australian
exports
to 4 destination Asian countries fluctuated during the given period. Over 25
percent
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of Australian
exports
were sent to Japan in 1990. It was
also
the highest value among three other countries. In contrary, goods and services that have been sent to India
was
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the fewest in 1990 compared to others. A different pattern happened five years later
,
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when
exports
to Japan fell sharply but remained
to be
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the biggest portion, for about 20
percent
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per cent
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of the total
export
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exports
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. In 2000, there was a sharp increase
of
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the export percentage sent to China. It continued to rise higher for the next ten years,
took
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and took
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over Japan in the first place. In 2012, the percentage of
exports
to China constantly increased
while
three other countries have remained stable ever since.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words exports with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.

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