Fresh water has always been a limited resources in some parts of the world. Today, however, growing worldwide demand has made this a global problem. What are the causes of the increased demand, and what measures can government and individuals take to respond to this problem.

The limited resources of fresh

water

used to be

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only in some nations of the world.

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, the

demand

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fresh

water

are

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surging and becoming a global issue. In

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discuss the causes

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surge

demand

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in demand

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and the solutions that could be taken by the government and people.

Firstly

,

growing

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population are the main reason

of

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this

issue. It leads to increased

demand

for fresh

water

for drinking and sanitation.

Moreover

, the increased

demand

pushes the expansion of agriculture and industry to support more lives.

Consequently

, needing more

water

to operate and

also

produce more contaminated

water

.

However

, the waste

processor

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to cleanse

this

waste are still not reliable.

For example

, in India, the

number of

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population

are

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really high and to support that

number

, India

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the industry, resulting in the contamination of

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the Gangga

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River. To resolve

this

problem, The government and people should take part in controlling the

number

of inhabitants.

For instance

, Indonesia

have

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a movement called "Keluarga Berencana",

this

movement pushes individuals to be more mindful, when building a family and to suggest

have

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two

childs

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only.

Thus

, later

indonesian

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families

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growth

are

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more stagnant.

Furthermore

,

government

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the government

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could take more measures by implementing policies to encourage

water

conservation and investing in technology to improve

water

efficiency.

While individuals

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could contribute by adopting

water

-saving practices at home,

such

as fixing leaks, using

water

-efficient appliances, and reducing

water

waste.

To conclude

, the main reason

of

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increased

fresh

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freshwater

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water

demand

is the increasing

number

of inhabitants,

while

some solutions

can

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that can

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be used are controlling the growth of inhabitants,

water

conservation, and improving

water

efficiency.