Fresh water has always been a limited resources in some parts of the world. Today, however, growing worldwide demand has made this a global problem. What are the causes of the increased demand, and what measures can government and individuals take to respond to this problem.
The limited resources of fresh
water
used to be Use synonyms
issue
only in some nations of the world. Add an article
an issue
However
, the Linking Words
demand
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of
fresh Change preposition
for
water
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are
surging and becoming a global issue. In Change the verb form
is
this
essay, I Linking Words
would
discuss the causes Wrong verb form
will
to
surge Change preposition
of to
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demand
and the solutions that could be taken by the government and people.
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in demand
Firstly
, Linking Words
growing
population are the main reason Correct article usage
the growing
of
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for
this
issue. It leads to increased Linking Words
demand
for fresh Use synonyms
water
for drinking and sanitation. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the increased Linking Words
demand
pushes the expansion of agriculture and industry to support more lives. Use synonyms
Consequently
, needing more Linking Words
water
to operate and Use synonyms
also
produce more contaminated Linking Words
water
. Use synonyms
However
, the waste Linking Words
processor
to cleanse Fix the agreement mistake
processors
this
waste are still not reliable. Linking Words
For example
, in India, the Linking Words
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number of
population Correct quantifier usage
apply
are
really high and to support that Change the verb form
is
number
, India Use synonyms
intensify
the industry, resulting in the contamination of Wrong verb form
intensified
Gangga
River.
To resolve Correct article usage
the Gangga
this
problem, The government and people should take part in controlling the Linking Words
number
of inhabitants. Use synonyms
For instance
, Indonesia Linking Words
have
a movement called "Keluarga Berencana", Change the verb form
has
this
movement pushes individuals to be more mindful, when building a family and to suggest Linking Words
have
two Wrong verb form
having
childs
only. Correct your spelling
children
Thus
, later Linking Words
indonesian
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Indonesian
families
growth Change noun form
families'
family's
are
more stagnant. Change the verb form
is
Furthermore
, Linking Words
government
could take more measures by implementing policies to encourage Add an article
the government
water
conservation and investing in technology to improve Use synonyms
water
efficiency. Use synonyms
Linking Words
While individuals
could contribute by adopting Correct word choice
Individuals
water
-saving practices at home, Use synonyms
such
as fixing leaks, using Linking Words
water
-efficient appliances, and reducing Use synonyms
water
waste.
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To conclude
, the main reason Linking Words
of
increased Change preposition
for
fresh
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freshwater
water
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demand
is the increasing Use synonyms
number
of inhabitants, Use synonyms
while
some solutions Linking Words
can
be used are controlling the growth of inhabitants, Correct pronoun usage
that can
water
conservation, and improving Use synonyms
water
efficiency.Use synonyms
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