The table shows the number of medals won by the top ten countries in the 2018 Winter Olympic Games.
The table illustrates information about
amount
of Add an article
the amount
medals
that has
been received by Change the verb form
have
high
ten Correct word choice
the top
counties
in the Winter Olympic Games in the years Correct your spelling
countries
of
1924 to 2018. Change preposition
apply
Overall
, it can be seen that most of the countries has
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have
stable
proportion of three types of Add an article
the stable
a stable
medals
, while
some of them has
slight differences.
Germany and Norway two leader of the table booked their spot in the top with 408 and 368 Change the verb form
have
medals
respectively. Correct article usage
The U.S
U.S
with 305 Correct your spelling
U.S.
medals
take
Change the verb form
takes
it's
spot in the fourth, only Replace the word
its
laking
behind with 9 Correct your spelling
lacking
medals
from Russia. It seems like Austria has unusual differences in gold, silver and bronze medals
as it is in Finland. These countries has
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have
less
gold Change the quantifier
fewer
medals
than other kinds of medals
. Sweden with smallest
number of Change the article
the smallest
medals
about 158 take
Correct subject-verb agreement
takes
it's
place Replace the word
its
in
the bottom of the table.Change preposition
at
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