The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007.

The line chart depicts the portion of residents in several Asian nations living in town from 1970 to 2020 with expectations for 2030 to 2040.
Overall
, it is clearly apparent, that Malaysia has the highest ratio in population
besides
that Thailand has been categorized as the lowest place in four decades.
To begin
with, Malaysia was the top second in citizens from
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of 1970 till 1990 with
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increment in the population of around 11% (41%), afterwards, it illustrates sharply upwards and stood at roughly 86%.
On the other hand
, the Philippines was recognised first highest in population in 1970 with nearly 32% natives,
then
in 1990 it reached somewhere 50% and faced a steep decline of approximately 8% from where it had a steady increase and is expected to reach back in 1990 percentage in 2040.
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