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The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now.

The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now.
#maps #university #sports #courts
The maps illustrate changes
of
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in
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sport
Fix the agreement mistake
sports
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 courts
which
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apply
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located in
university
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the university
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 from 1990 to now.
It is clear that
 the plan of courts
yard
Correct your spelling
courtyard
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 had several fundamental changes of
eliminate
Wrong verb form
eliminating
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 some parts and adjoining new ones. Looking closely at the graphs
show
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shows
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 that, the
Park
 which
placed
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is placed
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 on the left hand
on
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of
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 the plan has been removed completely and the Basketball Court has been replaced.
Also
, The Car
park
where
Correct word choice
which
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 was placed behind the
Park
, has been eliminated after modernized.
Moreover
,
Cafe
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the Cafe
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 that was in front of the
Park
 has
been remained
Change to the active voice
remained
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 at the
pervious
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previous
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 location and
Reception
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the Reception
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where
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which
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 was on the south side of
Cafe
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the Cafe
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did
Verb problem
has
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 not
have
Wrong verb form
had
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 any changes over the years. With regards to
the Outdoor
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The outdoor
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 Pool,
it
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apply
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has been transformed into
a
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an
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 Indoor Pool and
was stood
Wrong verb form
stands
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 in
the
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its
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 former position.
In addition
,
the
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apply
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Tennis
street
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Street
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were
Unnecessary verb
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found in the south part of the scheme has been enlarged and relocated to the Car
park
 after urbanized. A notable point was about
Changing
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the Changing
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 Room which has been moved to the opposite side of the Indoor Poll.
Consequently
, the Fitness centre has been added to the university yard and has been settled
on
Change preposition
in
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 the
south east
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southeast
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 department near the Changing Room.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words park with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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