Some people consider
thatCorrect determiner usage
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popularity of consumer goods numerously sold with the assistance of
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doCorrect word choice
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not think about why society really
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needCorrect pronoun usage
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. I completely agree with the statement and will support it with specific examples and reasons.
On the other hand
, merchandise well-sold because of great advertisements might not be as good as they were described. Let's take Remax as an example, there are many kinds of official and unofficial advertisements about how reliable
this
product is. Particularly, the Remax headphones function was mostly advertised as
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waterproof,
however
, after many complaints about its ability to waterproof does not concur with the description in the
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. In
this
case, a lot of
consumers
have absolutely been induced by attractive posters and
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postFix the agreement mistake
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on social media, which means
consumers
hardly could get
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a Correct article usage
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good
productsCorrect the article-noun agreement
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that
satisfiesChange the verb form
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their demands even though
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itCorrect pronoun usage
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might
cost
a lot.
Furthermore
,
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of advertisements may increase the
cost
of
consumers
.
For example
, those companies that increase the funds for publicizing will
also
increase the
cost
of advertised products as well, which will lead
consumers
to get them
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a high
cost
without considering other affordable and similar goods. As
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result, they will spend their money pointlessly on
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but different costed products.
In conclusion,
while
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merchandise
that is
well-advertised could attract more crowds, they might not concur with what buyers really need because of surplus description and pointless high
cost
.