the chart shows the percentage of land in four countries that was covered by forest between 1600 and 2000.
The line graph illustrates the percentage of area in four different countries that
was
covered by forest during the past four decades.
From the general Change the verb form
were
trend
it can be seen that England and Scotland remained Add a comma
trend,
desserted
in the past 400 years but in 1950 Correct your spelling
deserted
people
started to move to this
land. France showed fluctuating trends. On the contrary
,United
States was Correct article usage
the United
the
top of Change preposition
at the
list
with 50 Add an article
the list
percent
Change the spelling
per cent
people
in 1600.
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of people
To begin
with United
States in Correct article usage
the United
16
century was colonized as 50 Correct article usage
the 16
percent
Change the spelling
per cent
people
were living there Change preposition
of people
then
a downfall in number
of Change the article
a number
the number
people
can be seen till 1900. France had almost about 30% peopulation
in 1600 Correct your spelling
population
then
it showed a rapid decrease in number
of Change the article
a number
the number
people
colonized there and after 1850 an upward trend can be noticed. Scotland remained constant during
3 centuries but after 1950 urbanisation started there.
Change preposition
for
To conclude
most of the area is still covered by forest but ir
can be seen that Correct your spelling
it
people
are moving in
these areas and Change preposition
into
population
is growing there.Add an article
the population
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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