The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan.

The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan.
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The bar illustrates the
number
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of people in Japan with five-year intervals from 1950 through a projection of 2055 and the table presents the
number
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and proportion of people over 65 years old in four years comprising 1950, 2005, 2035 and 2055.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the
Japanese
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population
increases
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before dropping to almost the same
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as in the early
of
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the
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period.
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, elders whose age is more than 65 are predicted to be highest in 2055
Japanese
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society.
To begin
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with, the
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of
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citizens in 1950 was about 84.1 before escalating to reach a peak at 127.8 in 2005,
however
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, it slightly declined to 125.4 in 2015. The remarkable decrease is predicted to 110 in 2035 and
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it will nosedive again to 89.9 in 2055.
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, the elderly community represented 4.1 which was about 4.9% of total
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people. Fifty-five years later, the total of the old community surged to 25.7 and it was exactly one-fifth of the population. In 2035, it will soar to 37.2 and 34%,
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, the
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of elders fall to 36.5 but the percentage still shoot up to 41% in 2055.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, japanese with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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