The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over 3 different areas from 1985 to 1990. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over 3 different areas from 1985 to 1990. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart depicts the changes in rice exports in various places like
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Australia, Canada and the European Community from 1985 to 1990.
Overall
, it is clearly apparent, that throughout the period Australia is facing a dive in the illustrated graph and Canada has fluctuated throughout the time
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that the European Community has presented
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in exports.
To begin
with, from 1985 to 1986 Canada illustrated a steady decrease of around 6% (12%), afterwards, there was a rapid upward till 1988 of around 12% (25%)
then
it went slightly downwards to roughly 11%(14%) and
then
in 1990, it went till nearly 18%.
However
, the European Community was standing second highest exporter in 1985 with an estimated 17% and
then
there was a notable fall for a year of approximately 3% and
then
till 1988, it presents a slight upwards of 1% (15%). Eventually, after that, there was a significant uplift of somewhere 7% (22%).
In addition
, in 1985 Australia was at 15% but after a year it showed an increment of 1% and
then
a gradual decline throughout the period in 1990 it stood at around 12% with a fall of 6%.
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