The table shows the number of medals won by the top ten countries in the 2018 Winter Olympic Games.
The chart depicts the figures of individuals who won trophies like
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Gold
, Silver
and Bronze
in several nations in the 2018 Olympic plays.
Overall
, it is clearly apparent, Germany
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Besides
that Sweden and Finland had been categorized lowest places to win trophies.
To begin
with, Germany and Norway had similar ratios of winning medals in Gold
, Silver
and Bronze
of around 120, 120, and 110. Likewise
, Russia and America also
had similar portions in Gold
, Silver
and Bronze
roughly 125, 100 and 150.
In addition
, Australia had 232 medals by combining all of them and Canada with 199. However
, two nations Finland and Sweden are marked as the lowest trophy winners, Finland had approximately 40 Gold
, 62 Silver
and 55 Bronze
and Sweden with 60 Gold
, 42 Silver
and 56 Bronze
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