The table shows the number of medals won by the top ten countries in the 2018 Winter Olympic Games.

The table shows the number of medals won by the top ten countries in the 2018 Winter Olympic Games.
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The chart depicts the figures of individuals who won trophies like
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Gold
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,
Silver
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and
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in several nations in the 2018 Olympic plays.
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, it is clearly apparent,
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that Germany
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and Norway have set
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number of medals from the other 8 nations.
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that Sweden and Finland had been categorized lowest places to win trophies.
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with, Germany and Norway had similar ratios of winning medals in
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,
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and
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of around 120, 120, and 110.
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, Russia and America
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had similar portions in
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,
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and
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roughly 125, 100 and 150.
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, Australia had 232 medals by combining all of them and Canada with 199.
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, two nations Finland and Sweden are marked as the lowest trophy winners, Finland had approximately 40
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, 62
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and 55
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and Sweden with 60
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, 42
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and 56
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