The map below shows the changes that have taken place at the waterfront area of a town called Darwin between 2009 and 2014.

The diagram below illustrates how the waterfront area of a town called Darwin

is

Unnecessary verb

apply

show examples

changed between 2009 and 2014.

Overall

, the realm did not change that much since some institutions were still at the same places

such

as

school

Fix the agreement mistake

schools

show examples

, fishing

part

Correct your spelling

parties

show examples

and convention

center

Fix the agreement mistake

centers

show examples

.

Nevertheless

, many developments occurred

either

Correct word choice

apply

show examples

,

besides

that, more trees were planted, in 2009, there were only trees but in 2014 the trees were increasing over 10.

Firstly

, in 2009, the lake was surrounded by

the

Correct article usage

a

show examples

foot path

Correct your spelling

footpath

show examples

which was the only route to visit the sea. there were 2 industrial areas,

however

, the places were replaced by

swimming

Add an article

the swimming

a swimming

show examples

pool and university building,

furthermore

, the black buildings ascended from 3 to 6 five years later.

Secondly

, in 2014, apart from the increasing number of plants, a swimming pool

were

Change the verb form

was

show examples

added near the lake

hence

there were 3 pools during the period,

in addition

, the harbour

were

Change the verb form

was

show examples

built beside the sea and the crowds could follow the new

foot path

Correct your spelling

footpath

show examples

to go to the place.