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In many countries, young children are looked after by other people while parents go out to work. Is it a good thing or a bad thing?

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Master
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.Kovacs,
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was diagnosed with separation anxiety disorder. He
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presented with
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the
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complaints of panic whenever his mum
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 him and he
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. He is socially withdrawn and
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 to attend
kindergarden
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kindergarten
. He has insomnia and nightmares and
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preeoccupied
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preoccupied
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 with his mum's daily activities and having thought
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 she might leave him again. His mother has postnatal depression. She has
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auditary
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auditory
hallucination
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 of hearing voices
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calling her and she saw some men running around her house. Recently she
got
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complaints of high lethality of DSH attempt. From that attempt Master.Kovacs shows the
sighs
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signs
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 of separation anxiety. He has known
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cases
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 of Eczema and serous otitis media. Grommets are used at the age of 18 months. His mother Mrs.Elizabeth
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 worried about his condition. He underwent some initial assessments ,
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finally
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 we concluded that he has
separation
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 anxiety disorder.His mother requested a referral to your childhood mental health team and
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 wants a joint meeting with the case manager. We hope Master.Kovacs continues to make a speedy recovery. Yours sincerely Charge Nurse
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