The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
What has been depicted in the first chart is the
energy
consumption in the average household in Australia, while
the
second graph, the amount of Change preposition
in the
the
greenhouse gas emissions produced, is illustrated. Correct article usage
apply
Overall
, a large proportion of the energy
usage was allocated to heating and water
heating, while
the most greenhouse emissions result from water
heating and other appliances.
According to
the first chart, most significantly, nearly one-third and 42 % of energy
usage is used by water
heating and heating, respectively. Moreover
, the share of energy
consumption was devoted to other appliances, which is not clearly specified (a minority). Cooling, lighting, and refrigeration collectively accounted for 13 % of energy
used.
The second graph shows, water
heating was the biggest source of greenhouse emissions, which is a bit above 30%, followed by other appliances. Correct word choice
that water
In addition
, although
heating, cooling, and lighting together totalling around a quarter, refrigeration was only responsible for 14 per cent of the total.Submitted by hongminh317 on
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