You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie charts show the electricity generated in Germany and France from all sources and renewables in the year 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The pie charts show the electricity generated in Germany and France from all sources and renewables in the year 2009.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The pie charts on the left hand illustrate
electricity
generation from all resources in 2 different countries (
Germany
and
France
), in 2009,
while
the pie charts shown on the right hand extract the
renewables
part. Looking from an
overall
perspective, three kinds of sources were used for producing
electricity
including conventional thermal, nuclear and renewable, and
Germany
produced more
electricity
than
France
. The main source of
electricity
production belonged to conventional thermal in
Germany
and nuclear power in
France
, with 59.6% and 76%, respectively. Turning to
renewables
,
Germany
, with 17.4%, used 3.7% more than
France
with 13.7%.
Germany
utilized wind and biomass more than other resources with around 3/4 proportion of all renewable energies,
however
, the most usage for
France
was
Hydroelestric
Correct your spelling
Hydroelectric
, with 80%. In
France
solar had a negligible part in
electricity
generation from
renewables
(approximately 0.9%), and
Germany
with 6.1% of
renewables
used more solar energy.
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