everybody should be allowed admission to university study programs regardless of their level of academic ability

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permission to learn perspectives, whatever degree of academic skills, they have. I completely disagree with
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not that easy to be accepted to
universities
without having any academic knowledge,because nowadays
universities
have
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high requirements and
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expectations
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situation ,if each student were accepted to
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reputation,
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academic
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more attention in order to improve their knowledge equal to other
students
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students
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will no longer have any fundamental features and
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it will almost be impossible to teach all the
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university
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in conclusion,giving everyone freedom to entrance without high level of intelligence and skills , may lead to destruction of
universities
discipline and having no individual features.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • academic ability
  • admission criteria
  • equal opportunities
  • higher education
  • institutional resources
  • merit-based
  • qualification devaluation
  • under-qualification
  • vocational training
  • inclusive education
  • diversity in academia
  • competitive edge
  • global economy
  • academic standards
  • universal access
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