The diagram below explains the process o f making woodpellets, used to heat buildings. Summarize1 the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture explains how wood
pellets
are made to heat buildings. First,
sawdust comes from a sawmill. Then
, it's crushed into short fibers
in a hammer mill. After that, the Change the spelling
fibres
fibers
get wet with steam. Change the spelling
fibres
Next,
they're pushed through holes in a pellet machine, turning into pellets
. The pellets
cool down, and any extra dust gets sucked away. Finally
, the pellets
get put into bags weighing 18 kilos (about 40 pounds) to sell. These pellets
can be used in pellet stoves and furnaces to heat buildings. So, the process starts with sawdust, turns it into pellets
using steam and a machine, and ends with packing them for sale.Submitted by madinabonu.bm on
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