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The diagram below explains the process o f making woodpellets, used to heat buildings. Summarize1 the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below explains the process o f making woodpellets, used to heat buildings. Summarize1 the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The picture explains how wood
pellets
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 are made to heat buildings.
First,
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sawdust comes from a sawmill.
Then
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, it's crushed into short
fibers
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 in a hammer mill. After that, the
fibers
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 get wet with steam.
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they're pushed through holes in a pellet machine, turning into
pellets
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. The
pellets
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 cool down, and any extra dust gets sucked away.
Finally
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, the
pellets
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 get put into bags weighing 18 kilos (about 40 pounds) to sell. These
pellets
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 can be used in pellet stoves and furnaces to heat buildings. So, the process starts with sawdust, turns it into
pellets
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 using steam and a machine, and ends with packing them for sale.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words pellets with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "explains" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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