The graph shows the amount of fruit produced in four countries (France, Spain, Germany, Turkey) from 1970 to 2010.

The graph shows the amount of fruit produced in four countries (France, Spain, Germany, Turkey) from 1970 to 2010.
The line graph illustrates how many fruits were manufactured
in particular
areas(
France
, Spain, Germany, Turkey) from 1970 to 2010.
Overall
,
it is clear that
Spain was by far the most important place
of
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fruit
generation over the period shown.
Moreover
,
fruit
production in
France
and Turkey saw increasing trends,
while
in other two countries witnessed opposite trends. In 1970, roughly 5.5
million
tonnes
of
fruit
were produced in Spain. By 1980, the figure in that country reached
to
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a peak of just over 6
million
tonnes
, before slightly decreasing
at the end
of
this
period. Regarding
to
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Germany, the amount of
fruit
generated went down consistently to approximately 1.5
million
tonnes
in 1990.
However
, the amount remained stable before negligibly dropping by 1.3
million
tonnes
in 2010. In 1970,
France
provided the lowest amount of
fruit
( 1.2
millions
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tonnes
),
whereas
, in the following years, the production from
France
overtook the production from Germany,
then
experienced a fluctuating increase to around 3
million
tonnes
.
Besides
, the generation in Turkey saw a steady growth for the whole 40-year period.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words france, fruit, million, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • produce
  • trends
  • decrease/increase
  • production
  • peak
  • fluctuation
  • stability
  • volatility
  • significant
  • milestone
  • conjecture
  • harvest
  • agricultural
  • yield
  • decade
  • data representation
  • timespan
  • graph analysis
  • comparative
  • rankings
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